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PostSubject: MY work...   Wed 16 Jul - 15:30

Well, I have tons of poems but....don't really know if they're that well..people on D&A have said they're great, so tell me what you think!


In the fight for survival we're all alone,
in the fight for survival, we fight on our own,
and in this endless battle there is a light,
A light that lets our souls burn red hot, even in the night!
But, all this endless war is going nowhere, and the light burned out,
Now man can do nothing against the shackles of death, but pout,
There is no more help for us in this bout,
Now death will destroy us all like some pesky weed,
And I hope you see,
We should fight together!
And now you'll see,
this can't go on forever!
So pick up your weapons and join me,
We can win, and lose deaths shackles, We can be free!


A sudden lonelyness thats just been fealt,
Like a bad card at a poker game,
Towards you, you wish it wont be dealt,
A feeling impossible to tame...

She made a promise and said she'd be there,
but when the time comes, I sit and stare,
Hoping for someone but it seems she doesn't care,
and then the feeling went out, and banged like a flare,
I start to tremble, waiting for what seemed to be forever,
and to notice, the only company to ever come, was a simple feather,
Probably blown off of a stray bird,
and then around the corner I see 2 birds chirping and acting absurd.
Looking for their family, looking for their flock.
And I sit here staring and I start to talk,
At least there is someone to talk to, even if none of its heard,
I just wish she'd come, once is all I ask,
but she can be forgetful, and can forget even the simplest tasks.
So I guess its another day gone by,
Another burst of lonelyness, and another accidental lie,
So I get up and go walk away just in time to see three birds fly,
Looks like they got a tag-a-long, a new guy,
Well, at least his friends come,
Rather than break a promise and make me feel glum,
I wish she'd see, I can't always be alone,
I only wish for her to come, rather than make me feel unkown,
Still wishing, hoping for her to be here with me,
but I guess this lonelyness was meant to be...

And when finally found there is a wanting, burning like a flame,
A feeling you want to proclaim,
But when the time has come, you get swallowed in shame,
Making you feel even more lame.
(I really played with birdies THEY LIEKED MEH!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy )


Whats the point?
Why are we here, why not there? Why are we human, why not a hare? Why are we alive, why not dead?
Whats the point of living, if the most felt feeling is dread?
I know that, without hatred, there is no love. I see that without Sorrow, there is no happiness.
But, it makes you wonder, whats the point! Yes, living life to the fullest is great, yet not living is also great! By living, you can feel pain, sorrow, agony, yet, when dead, you feel no pain, sorrow, or agony, yet, you also feel no love, joy, or happiness!
Isaac Newton once said, that for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction, this is true, but, not only with forces. I'll give you an example, Happiness and Sorrow, Love and Hatred, Pain and Joy, Death and Life! What is the point of it all if they just cancel out!
They're all opposites, yet, we still live on, as if nothing happened, and nothing is different, but, I know, nothing is the same, it may feel like crap, but don't take the blame!
I wonder, is it possible to find true happiness? Is it possible to find true love?
You may not know it, but life is a riddle. Can't find the words? You wanna see the riddle? Well my friend, you're looking at it!


We are all given a right,
We all have constitutional protection
We are all in the darkness with no light,
A runaway place filled with freedom and redemption,
We are all given a light,
and with this light we can see,
But this light and this right are a privilege,
They aren't handed to you on a silver platter for free!
So wise up, cuz you're at the worlds edge,
Look around, its the only ledge,
No more lies or you're dead,
And this isn't like that other time were you just fled!
Oh, and remember this last thing to think through,
this is your last chance, for all that pain you caused to undo...


I miss her warmth,
I miss her kiss,
And now that shes gone,
I feel no bliss.

I sit here waiting,
Hoping it was a mistake,
I miss the lovely feeling,
And without it I shake.

I miss her smile,
I still miss her hug,
I know its been a while,
But I still feel some love.


I sit here staring,
Having nothing to do,
I was always so caring,
When I had you.

My heart turned black,
and I'm alone,
I still wish you hadn't stabbed my back,
For now I'm bleeding, and taking this pain, on my own.

But now that your gone,
My heart has taken a toll,
And now I feel withdrawn,
And I've taken my last fall.


I sit here wondering,
Under this tree.
I sit here pondering,
Will we be free?
That I cannot answer,
And, no I wont take your plea.
For me, I am free,
By doing what is right to me.
Following others isn't your pass,
posing like others wont make you surpass.
So, be yourself, and be like me,
By being yourself, you are being free!


I slowly drift into the darkness of the shadow,
I let the cold embrace me,
My heart is feeling shallow,
This is a living hell, that I can guarentee.
Darkness, Dispair, Desease, Death, these are the only feeling left,
Darkness, Dispair, Disease, I will never feel at ease,
Darkness and Dispair, My heart will never repare,
Darkness, Darkness, it is all I see within the mess.


Slowly shifting under foot,
Riding to the shore,
Crashing down upon the beach,
Then drifting back for more
(lol.....its short...)


Blue fire,
Red fire,
They will soon retire,

Into the fire,
Into the fire,
We must go, for consequences are dire,

Red flame,
Blue flame,
We must keep them tame,

When they escape,
The land will Reshape,
And be set aflame,

Blue flame,
Red flame,
At least we are keeping them tame,

But what if we weren't,
And this land got burnt,
Who would take the blame?

Red Fire,
Blue Fire,
Soon they will retire,
Into the fire,
Into the fire...
Then we'll all expire.


Still waiting,
A pain my heart canít take,
Still wondering,
I am starting to suffocate,
Still Wishing,
Iím starting to doubt,
Still Worrying,
I think my luck is out...
Still waiting,
wishing,
wondering...if she even cares....


She gave me the key, Iíll never lose it,

She gave me the key, Iíll be using it,

She gave me the key, Iíll keep it by my side, never to let it fall or slide,

She gave me the key, and this key, is the key to her heart.


I walk on down to the sea,
It always calls straight to me,
I cannot resist that salty smell,
At times I feel like I cannot repel,
I walk on down to the sea,
To have my loved one look at me...


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PostSubject: Re: MY work...   Wed 16 Jul - 16:19

Holy smokes... Your first two poems were absolutely amazing. You really are a fantastic poet. You might even have more skill than me, I wouldn't doubt it. ^w^

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PostSubject: Re: MY work...   Wed 16 Jul - 16:37

whoa that awesome Marik you better watch out

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PostSubject: Re: MY work...   Wed 16 Jul - 16:51

Thank you both of you Razz Anyway, you haven't seen all of my poetry Twisted Evil

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PostSubject: Re: MY work...   Thu 17 Jul - 0:56

Anyone? No one likes poems that much here apparently..

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PostSubject: Re: MY work...   Thu 17 Jul - 13:14

please dont double post and we like poems

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